For my final front cover I asked for feed back from people in my target audience to see what I could change or what I have done well.
Shari - the colours go well together and the angle of gaze is good on the artist
Marwa - the genre of the magazine is obvious. I like the colour scheme and the way things are arranged on the page. I also like how the angle of gaze straight away attracts the audience to the magazine.
Dawn - I think you could have chosen a better bar-code and incorporated the price a bit better. I also think the price is a bit too low for a magazine that you are trying to sell as high standard. I like the angle of gaze and colour scheme. I also like the positioning of the image and the props used.
Nicola - I feel that it needs to be more together, the price should be either below the bar-code or in the other corner and more discrete. The colours used are very consistent and the image is very clear and attractive, it makes me want to read it.
I am happy with the feedback I received because it is both critical and appraising. For example, Nicola mentioned that the price should be more discrete, so if given the chance I would change where the price and barcode are located. I am happy that I went for this colour scheme because I have gotten positive feed back for it
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