This is the feedback I got for my DPS;
Nicola - Lacks wholeness and is not as good as the first two pages. The images used could have been better and this is not as strong as the other pages; however a clear colour scheme has been used.
Marwa - Linking to your contents page, you have stuck with the same font and colour scheme on your dps. They look as if to be both from one magazine; which is good because it gives the effect of your genre even more. I especially like the layout on your dps and the use of colours with your questions and answers
Shari - All the colours link and good placing of images. I like the quote "it was me vs. me", it draws me in straight away and makes me want to read more.
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